The haiku I selected is : Haiku 04
love lasts for a while,
when the while is forever,
forever looks a while.
Though it’s the first time I read the haiku and tried my own, yet it was a good exercise to sharpen the thought procedure. I wanted to explain a real story, but instead tried it this way. Hope its okay.
Love has its own side effects ,
The eye has to cry to shed the pain,
But still the heart belongs to him.