IBMC #04: Hunt a Haiku Challenge

The haiku I selected is : Haiku 04

love lasts for a while,

when the while is forever,

forever looks a while.

Though it’s the first time I read the haiku and tried my own, yet it was a good exercise to sharpen the thought procedure. I wanted to explain a real story, but instead tried it this way. Hope its okay.

Love has its own side effects ,

The eye has to cry to shed the pain,

But still the heart belongs to him.





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